Thursday, August 7, 2014

In Response to ~ Brian's Meeting The Bar: It’s a small, small world — at dVerse Poets Pub ~



 people, at first strangers
enter  soul's chambers

 create a spark, a fire 
 In  scattered ashes

One reaches out  to touch
 nothingness, visible

To hold, yet
 the presence is felt, known

as the hidden heart connects
 in unseen oceans of emotions


18 comments:

  1. create a spark, a fire
    In scattered ashes... love that... so true, amazing how someone who was once a stranger can mean the a lot to you after awhile

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  2. it is pretty amazing how people connect....how just a touch can bring them alive...and that can be interest as well...and it doesnt have to be sensual love...but even good friends...how they bring each other alive...

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    1. Indeed Mr Brian Many strangers become friends and share life's precious moments.We may never see them or meet them personally but they are present.Thank you I enjoyed writing these lines The theme of Unseen is close to my heart

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  3. It's pretty amazing how we all start out as strangers and then can quickly make deep connections with one another. Told so beautifully here by you.

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  4. Very neat envisioning/recording of the process of un-making strange.

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    1. Thank you I am encouraged by your visit and views.We may never meet but we are able to exchange thoughts -we are connected more than we realise

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  5. It truly is interesting, the process that causes strangers to become friends!

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  6. nice.. love the magic in those connections along the way that make life so much more valuable

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  7. the strangers who we see often but never know, always intrigue me

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  8. The apparent randomness of that sparkling first connection have always amazed me..

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    1. connections have amazing ways in nature and the universe

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    1. Thank you Roslyn I am so happy and feel honored and encouraged by your appreciation.You are a great writer and poet yourself.Best regards

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