Sunday, December 14, 2014

For POETS UNITED ~ Poetry Pantry #231 ~ This Land Is Golden Green and Good ~


this land is golden green and good

for them, who knew and understood
all are poets in perspective prose
all visions revealed all visions close-
rocks, soil or stone the path is laid
straight or steep by walking made
come gaze feast and be full serene 
 place in valley and mountain scene 

this land is golden green and good

8 comments:

  1. This was a very smooth and wonderful read.
    ZQ

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  2. Loved this....flows right over the land...especially loved, 'for them, who knew and understood'...that is the key to keeping the land green.

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  3. I love the meter and rhythm of this. Somehow the relationship by people in land is special...

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  4. I like how you used the same line at the beginning and end of this poem....making a strong point. Indeed 'this land is golden green and good.'

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  5. I love the rhyme and rhythm in this piece, the feelings is relates, and the very cool format. Well done!

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  6. could be a metaphor for poetry too. each has its own rhyme and meter, freedom. :)

    the world is lucky to have poets seeing things differently

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  7. Sounds like the way many teach poetry, here are the parts make it work.

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  8. Dear All Thank You for the lovely encouraging visits and comments...

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