tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post2994208282466496713..comments2024-01-28T09:45:40.103-08:00Comments on Environment Stories & Memoirs: For POETS UNITED ~ Midweek Motif ~ Swimming ~ 'No Ropes On The Skies ' ~Anjum Wasim Darhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-47740252284067488472015-01-21T12:17:50.747-08:002015-01-21T12:17:50.747-08:00No rift or drift or rope or raft.No rift or drift or rope or raft.colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16669375650785054059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-5624533664524377422014-11-16T14:25:30.250-08:002014-11-16T14:25:30.250-08:00Anjum,
Loved this poem. So much movement and imag...Anjum,<br /><br />Loved this poem. So much movement and imagery to add to the whole scene set with your words...<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-11745447903811009912014-11-15T05:06:21.680-08:002014-11-15T05:06:21.680-08:00def..we all are swimming ..def..we all are swimming ..Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-83338439853510610982014-11-14T06:25:22.004-08:002014-11-14T06:25:22.004-08:00The great god's creation are marvellous and we...The great god's creation are marvellous and we all are swimming along.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-48728462564133275422014-11-13T21:31:54.098-08:002014-11-13T21:31:54.098-08:00Thank you Mr MeisnerThank you Mr MeisnerAnjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-24777041036777212742014-11-13T19:49:39.498-08:002014-11-13T19:49:39.498-08:00Ah what a way to see the water and being in it.Ah what a way to see the water and being in it.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-92211302663960533212014-11-13T11:00:03.342-08:002014-11-13T11:00:03.342-08:00Thank you Sumana Thank you Sumana Anjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-89970424184596620472014-11-13T09:43:19.323-08:002014-11-13T09:43:19.323-08:00love the spiritual tone of the poem...love the spiritual tone of the poem...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-71780186904380020912014-11-13T09:27:42.263-08:002014-11-13T09:27:42.263-08:00I have edited the poem. The universe is a swirling...I have edited the poem. The universe is a swirling swimming miracle...as swimming by humans is also a miracle.The prompt is an amazing one Thank you Dr and POETS UNITED<br />.My Urdu poem with translation was relevant to the topic but perhaps not suited here. <br />Anjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6180247138827497703.post-32569529172556942362014-11-13T08:18:02.021-08:002014-11-13T08:18:02.021-08:00I'm not clear where the posting of your poem e...I'm not clear where the posting of your poem ends--at the firstt line? the second? Is the third the source of the line quoted in the second poem? Or is the entire thing a translation? So I will respond up through the second as if it's all one poem. It feels like an active rushing, swirling miracle--no supports needed as it moes, and us finite beings with it. All the verbals give the sense of never ceasing, an infinitity, ordered, as if all one.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com