And then I see you,
not your image,
but you yourself outlined,
smiling quietly, you descend -
I wait , trying to comprehend your vision-
I have no way to stop or hold
the charming intrusion,
I just feel the emptiness,
filled with silence, cold-
I reach out, only to touch
Nothingness-
Behold!
I am engulfed in the fold
a sense unexplained, untold
is it real or is it a dream
I think, I try , I begin to cry
and drown into a tingling numbness.
Ah! Love's First and Last Visit
13 comments:
A beautiful but sad write. Nicely done!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/
sad,
vivid write.
Very vivid, beautiful and sad at the same time so well done
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/
love it,
very passionate imagery,
you rock.
Dear Anjum
I enjoyed it and could relate to it very much... you were so evocative and made me feel it from the depths of my heart..
Thanks for sharing. Look forward to your entry in the coming poetry picnic week 8 theme “Friends, relationship… ”
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/10/whispers-love-and-loss-butterfly.html
beautiful.
the taj is really a brilliant structure! my thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/03/how-i-wish/
This is very sad but at the same time you did such a beautiful write thsnks for sharing
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/05/today%E2%80%99s-feelings/
Hello.
My first visit here.
Beautiful expressions & nice imagery.
Very heartfelt.
Thanks for sharing.
Yesterday With You
Love this. Brilliant read
http://www.jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/
Sadness expressed with the most beautiful words....brilliant!
Just lovely! Loved the ending..
"Loves first and last visit.."
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