The prompt for today: write a poem (any form; rhyming or not) that includes the word “shed” or a form of the word. I expect to see lots of diversity in the posts for today. Shed your inhibitions and let your imaginations run with it!
that were bringing fears, thoughts of one
unwell and suffering,
how long can one remain in a dull damp shed,
head down, waiting hoping praying
Come Come Come'
the sun has shed off its coveringthe clouds are sailing away
revealing the bright light
come let us shed our burdens
be grateful and be light
let freedom ring in
let people have the right
for enough blood has been shed
enough land has become red
enough children and soldiers dead
so let the spirit be free
and the soul be light
let darkness shed the pall
let there be pure and true light
14 comments:
Damp sheds make one want true light.
...how long can one remain in a dull damp shed.....tears shed vociferously for some one or thing or place lost.
You’ve posed some thoughtful questions here....used the word “shed” in numerous contexts.
There is some darkness in the poem but it reaches a light at the end...hopeful. I like that. Let it be so!
Very glad you posted to the prompt!
What a positive uplifting message here. Yes, enough darkness and suffering - really liked this Anjum! :-)
Thank you Mr Robtkistner
Thank you Friend Lillian A great prompt for a language and literature enthusiast and a poetry lover. I could feel the darkness coming in but then tried to reach the light...so Divine and Eternal.I am glad you liked it. Regards.
Thank you Mr Frank, Somehow the shed first appeared quite damp, but then a shed is one of the best shelters too specially in a sudden burst of shower from the skies...
it feels like a craving for hot sunlight to burn away the dampness of the dark
The call is strong
Thank you Mr Alexander De
the world is so full of ash war clouds it needs more sunlight
Too much bloodshed I full agree...
Thank you sir..indeed true tragic
This is both a serious commentary on the state of the world, and and a sunny uplifting.
Thank you Dear Sara
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